Kate’s fabulous writing

Kate wrote some brilliant descriptive sentences today about the character of Harry from Tony Ross’ version of “The Boy Who Cried Wolf”. If you haven’t read it, Harry (the boy who cries “Wolf!”) is pretty mean and silly. This is what Kate has to say about him. Click on the little picture for the full version.

What could Kate improve? Remember to be a critical friend – tell her what you like, then tell her something she could improve in a nice way!